Hey there!
I’m open for business as a freelance editor of genre fiction, specializing in science-fiction, fantasy and horror.
In today’s competitive market, your short story, novella, or novel will need to stand-out and be as thoroughly polished as it can possibly be to stand a good chance at getting published. Having an extra, professional eye cast over it can greatly increase those chances in your favour.
A bit about me and my qualifications: From between 2014 and 2020, I was the fiction editor-in-chief and producer of Hugo-winning audio magazine, StarShipSofa.
Authors who I’ve worked for as editor include George R. R. Martin, William Gibson, Robin Hobb, Harlan Ellison, Peter Watts, Robert Silverberg, Hannu Rajaniemi, Joe Haldeman, Nnedi Okorafor, Neal Asher, Joe Lansdale, Marc Laidlaw, and hundreds of others.
I acquire stories both through the slush pile and through solicitation, usually working with the authors directly. In some cases, I go through rewrites and line edits with the author to improve the story’s world-building, characterization, plot direction, prose and narrative arc.
Otherwise, I am also an author of science-fiction, fantasy and nonfiction. My Common trilogy is published with Gollancz/Orion, and I have published around 40+ short stories, many of which appear in my collection Broken Stars. My work has appeared in 15 languages, and I have a BA in Film Studies and Creative Writing from the University of New South Wales.
Whatever editing project I’m working on, I approach it with the same work ethic. I respect the author’s vision for their story and want to help bring that vision to its full and upmost realisation. Whether it’s characterization, world-building, plot or tone, I want to dig deep into the foundations of a story and find that indelible spark, and polish it until it shines.
Whether it’s the weird or traditional, far-flung space opera or gothic horror, light and funny or dark and morbid, my philosophy is to commit myself fully to its tone and voice and style, and help build upon that.
Whatever you write, and whatever editing services you’re looking for, I’d love to hear from you.
These are the types of editing services I offer:
Developmental Editing:
This is big picture stuff, the issues that focus on a product’s overall, large scale quality such as inconsistent and poor world-building, pacing, characterization, motivations, plot holes, narrative frameworks and story. If you want to focus on a particular aspect, such as clarifying character motivations or fixing broken world-building, that can be done, too. I’ll work by reading the manuscript and making notes in Track Changes, noting the strengths and weaknesses of your work, and where I think things can be added, clarified, or cut out. I’ll tell you things along the lines of “adding this would make your character’s actions much clearer, and provide emotional context” or “I felt this aspect of world-building was introduced too late, and as a result the earlier chapters are still clear. Maybe introduce this world-building on page 5 instead of 20?” I’m happy to discuss the manuscript and provide possible solutions via email.
If you are interested, please contact me to discuss your project and rates.
Line Editing/Copyediting:
This is the small-scale stuff, the sentence-by-sentence, paragraph-by-paragraph nitty gritty that helps put forward a professional-looking product. The focus is on issues such as continuity, dialogue, clarity, awkward sentences, repetition, consistency, word choice, style, voice and tone. I’ll see to these issues by way of comments in the margin and, when appropriate, directed changes in the document.
Proof reading:
This is the very last stage and should be undertaken when all other editing and rewriting is complete. This is a check of the final pages to weed out typing errors and spelling mistakes. Formatting may be checked, and critical inconsistencies may also be brought to the author’s attention. This is usually the last thing that is done before a document goes off to the printer.
It is important than the proofreader is not the same as your editor.
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Looking forward to hearing from you!
What people have been saying about my work:
“Working with Jeremy and StarShipSofa was an absolute pleasure. He’s a class act (in spite of being willing to use one of my stories) and a true champion of the science fiction community.” – Michael R. Fletcher, author of Beyond Redemption, The Mirror’s Truth and Swarm and Steel
JEREMY SZAL 